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On The Passing Of Storyteller William Goldman (And How To Sell A Screenplay)

We had a post before today that was inwards the queue for the weekend but was bumped upward on give-and-take of Mr. Goldman's choke because of its reference to i of his stories: "The Princess Bride".

Goldman wrote a lot of stuff, novels together with teleplays a memoir, curt stories, simply nearly every medium curt of cuneiform tablets. But it was for his screenplays he was best known together with for which he picked upward a distich Oscars: Best Original Screenplay for "Butch Cassidy together with the Sundance Kid" together with Best Adapted Screenplay for "All the Presidents Men".

He also wrote a lot of screenplays, adapted together with original, that most motion painting junkies convey heard of:
The Stepford Wives
Marathon Man
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Twins
Misery 
Indecent Proposal 
Last Action Hero
For me though, the eye-opener on simply how proficient the guy was, was the lite western Maverick.

A Hollywood friend sent a re-create of the screenplay together with said if I always wanted to enjoin my storey all I had to exercise was larn to write similar this together with the script itself would endure the prospectus for the offering together with truly sell the deal:
MAVERICK 
Influenza A virus subtype H5N1 Western yesteryear William Goldman

FADE IN ON:
 EXT. DESOLATE LANDSCAPE - HANGING TREE - DAY

Rocks. Cactus. The occasional tree.
Not a house you'd similar to pass your summertime vacation.

Now in that place are sounds: Influenza A virus subtype H5N1 WHIPPING WIND begins to acquire LOUDER. And inwards the distance, but GROWING: THUNDER.

CAMERA STARTS TO MOVE --

SLOWLY, INEXORABLY, ACROSS this dead house --

-- all of a abrupt it STOPS. We are inwards a Sergio Leone TIGHT CLOSEUP of simply a hideous looking man. One oculus looks at nowadays ahead. The other wanders.

CAMERA MOVES AGAIN.

The air current is truly kicking upward --
-- suddenly, or together with therefore other STOP.

Another Leone CLOSEUP.

Influenza A virus subtype H5N1 minute man. This guy makes the kickoff i await handsome. Both his eyes work, which is an improvement. But his cervix has been horribly burned equally if from a noose.

CAMERA IS MOVING AGAIN.

LOUDER THUNDER. Influenza A virus subtype H5N1 tempest is coming fast.

CAMERA STOPS

We are LOOKING AT the to the lowest degree appetizing of the three. Not that he's scarred, non that all his parts aren't inwards proper working gild -- it's simply that he's together with therefore damn frightening.
Not to refer huge.

This is THE ANGEL together with similar the other two, he is seated on a horse. And he is staring intently at something.

FROM The Angel -- nosotros become to...

BRET MAVERICK
for this is who the trio is looking at.
(CONTINUED)
Learn to write similar that together with the screenplay itself is the sales tool together with therefore y'all don't convey to read:

We posted that inwards 2014's "The Tropes You'll Need To Know When Writing Your Dystopian Movie Script" amongst the comment: "If y'all marking nosotros would appreciate a producer credit together with mayhap a indicate or 2 of participation."

The asking notwithstanding stands.

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